Chapter 241: Ch 1-17 Updated
As stated, the beginning of the fanfic is updated to my liking. I admit the first 8 chapters went through minimal changes because I didn't get on a laptop till then. But other chapters should note some improvement in grammar.
Major Changes Include—
1) Renaming Reiko (Mitsuko's Eldest Daughter) to Souko.
2) Alternate Titles
3) Again, supposedly better grammar (Could still have some mistakes, but I did my best.)
4) I redid the smut slightly.
5) I think Nik comes off slightly better than previous iterations, something I will improve in further updates since most complaints stem from the early part of the avatar arc. But I won't sacrifice all the development I had for Nik for the sake of making others happy, I'll just make the development slightly linear. contemporary romance
There is a good chance that there will be some more drastic change in the avatar arc edit, nothing that will affect the plot progression but the pace itself. This notice will be removed and added to the next chapter's footnote tomorrow, so this won't be deleted, no worries.
done.co